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The Special Attic - by Alicia


What a wonderful story, Alicia! This writing topic really sparked your imagination and it is clear that you had so many ideas! You are currently reading lots of Harry Potter, and I can see how this has fired your imagination. It's lovely to see. I like your similes as well - "... as if it were a four-headed human." Also, you are trying out lots of new sentence openers and this brings a lot of detail and variety into your writing. Thank you sharing this with us!