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The School Trip - by Amaira

19.05.21

This is a great story about a school trip with a twist, Amaira. I like your choice of opening statement: 'School trips are normally safe - but not this one.' That really makes me want to read on! You have chosen some lovely ideas to include in your story, such a shrinking and there being a slide out of the tree. On every floor there is a different world! Great job!

It is also important to let people know that with your sister, Eva, you have written a fantastic collection of 8 short stories (fables) and they are for sale on Amazon. They are brilliantly written, funny and have amazing illustrations.

The book is called: Short Stories: By the children, for the children!: Amazon.co.uk: Deotale, Eva, Deotale, Amaira: 9798594992122: Books

All proceeds of your book sale go to the charity 'Being Purple' (www.beingpurple.co.uk), which is a charity to promote awareness around disability and inclusion.