The School Trip - by Amaira
This is a great story about a school trip with a twist, Amaira. I like your choice of opening statement: 'School trips are normally safe - but not this one.' That really makes me want to read on! You have chosen some lovely ideas to include in your story, such a shrinking and there being a slide out of the tree. On every floor there is a different world! Great job!
It is also important to let people know that with your sister, Eva, you have written a fantastic collection of 8 short stories (fables) and they are for sale on Amazon. They are brilliantly written, funny and have amazing illustrations.
All proceeds of your book sale go to the charity 'Being Purple' (www.beingpurple.co.uk), which is a charity to promote awareness around disability and inclusion.