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The Mysterious Shop - by Adrian

01.06.21

This is a wonderful story describing a trip to a mysterious shop selling marvellous sweets and drinks, Adrian, and also a lovely picture to go with it. Thank you for sharing it with us! You have used great adjectives and nouns (decorative, intricate, morsel). You have also invented an intriguing-sounding drink called 'The Super Lemon Tea 2000'. It's lovely to see how your love of Harry Potter stories has helped you to come up with your own, delightful ideas. Well done, Adrian!