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The Magical Cave - by Adrian


This is a wonderful piece of writing, Adrian, from our Boost English class! You take your reader on a journey to the cave, and along the way you describe what you see, your emotions and your actions. This is a great simile: '...there was deep snow like whipped cake cream...'. Describing the powder as 'spectacular' and 'golden' gives us a vivid image. Well done!