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The Letter - by Talha

30.04.21

Talha, this is a wonderful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your target was to use fronted adverbials to show the passing of time and the move the story on - and you have done this brilliantly! You have used: 'Just then...', 'So he quickly...' and 'Without hesitation...' You have also used lovely adjectives, such as the 'delicate' letter. A huge well done!

The Letter, by Talha