The Letter - by Haadiyah
Haadiyah - this is a fantastic story. It's hard to believe that you wrote this in just 15 minutes during the class! You explain the complex relationship between the father and son so well, and the moral at the end of the story is well written and well chosen. You have used some new vocabulary (precarious and lustre) and your rhetorical questions really help the reader to see in to the mind of the protagonist and they are good techniques to move the plot forwards. A huge well done!
The Letter, by Haadiyah