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My Alien Teacher - by Hibah

14.07.21

What lurks behind the office door in school? If you are brave enough to want to know, read on ...

This is a wonderful description of a student, Hibah, who sees, by accident, her headmistress transform into an alien. The girl is saved by the bell, just in time. You have used adventurous vocabulary to paint a vivid image, such as a 'haunting sight' , 'the rippling of the neon, green grass cascaded down her' and 'her throbbing cranium wriggled'. You have also included a short sentence for effect and to give variety to your overall paragraph structure: 'Only the flesh remained.' I can't wait to see what you write next! Thank you for sharing this with us and well done!

My Alien Teacher, by Hibah