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Children's writing: using two adjectives - by Samarth

17.02.22

Thank you for sharing your writing, Samarth. It was fantastic to read this and see how you had used two adjectives together, plus lots of other techniques to bring your writing to life. You have used 'scaly' and 'bumpy' to describe the tortoise, as well as the simile, 'slow as a snail'. Your choice of verb, 'nibbled', is a lovely image, as is the phrase 'one big gulp'. This is a pleasure to read. Well done.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

 

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