Children's writing: using repetition - by Krish
22.11.22
Wow, Krish! It's hard to believe your age when I read this super writing. Your task was to create atmosphere by describing this picture. The skill was to use repetition to do this. And, you've included so many excellent examples, such as:
The more the cars relentlessly drove, the more he felt distraught.
It's also so good to see that you have thought carefully about how actions and events can affect a character's emotions. Super job!
Let's read...
