Children's writing: The Yak - by Sanil

Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing, Sanil. It is rich in powerful verb choices and figurative language, such as ' ..the feather of her bow danced in the steam ...'.

Your sensitive observations about the relationship between the girl and yak are beautiful, such as, '...they both peacefully coexisted on the peak ...'.

Reading this is like taking a roller coaster ride though vivid imagery; I felt as if I were there watching.

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