Children's writing: The Door - by Rayyan

Your writing is packed with images that create intrigue and tension, Rayyan.

Starting with a two-word sentence makes the reader stop, and this makes us stop breathing. Good choice!

She froze.

The oxymoron, 'unignorable silence', also adds to the tension as we imagine how silent it is and this is something that can't be ignored because it is unusual.

Your choices of adjectives are wonderful, including the one describing the majestic dress: 'alabaster white'.

Great writing, Rayyan.

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