Children's writing: The Ghost - by Anniyah

Starting with this intriguing statement is a fantastic idea, Anniyah:


When Sophie first met Lilly, she was terrified.


Your reader will want to know who Sophie and Lilly are, and why Sophie was so terrified. You've built up the backstory so well, giving information about events leading up to meeting Lilly - great job! Thanks so much for sharing your writing.

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