Children's writing: The Friendly Ghost - by Krish

Thank you so much for sharing your home writing with us, Krish. You have set the scene perfectly by using well-chosen adjectives to describe this forest. You have also described how your character was feeling due to being alone:

The child walked through the misty, freezing forest alone and scared.

Then, you tell us about the light by using the adjective 'few' - this helps us to understand that is half-light, which makes it scary because the child won't be able to see well:

A few lanterns lit up the pathway, but it was still very dark.

Fantastic ideas!


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