Children's writing: The Celt - by Krish

What a powerful way to start this writing using a simile to describe this fearsome Celt, Krish: 

Sentanta's rough, silvery skin was like a silverback gorilla's.

You go on to give your readers lots of details about this Celt's appearance but also you suggest his personality through his speech:

"Even if we lose, we keep fighting."

This shows his determination and bravery.

Top job, Krish!


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