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Children's writing: The Shadow - by Selena

15.03.23


Starting with two onomatopoeic words (Click! Click!) is a lovely way to draw your reader straight into the action, Selena. It creates tension and makes us wonder what's making the noise. Good choice!

I was then utterly intrigued by the description of the 'long-fingered, frail hand' - super!

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