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Children's writing: adjectives - by Fouzan

17.02.22

Thank you for sharing your writing, Fouzan. Your task was to think about your adjective choices, and you chosen some excellent ones to help your reader to imagine the tortoise island. You used, 'bumpy', 'rough' and 'mysterious'. You also thought carefully about your characters and how they would escape using the balloon. Well done!
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