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an animal character by sam, age 9


Sam, you really have put a lot of thought into writing in the first person and from a thinking animal's point of view. It's a very entertaining piece of writing and I love the accurate use of 'wad' and 'smirk' to start to build up a picture of the human thug character. Thanks for sharing!

The Great Dane, by Sam

(an extract from Sam's writing)

Today I got to go out and cause some chaos. I get to go to the park. So here we go. Before we left my owner grabbed a wad of cash and shoved it in his pocket. When we walked there, my owner had a smirk on his face. When we entered the park, my owner was walking towards someone. One thug looked at my owner and shouted....