writing using a picture - by nandini
Thank you for sharing this writing Nandini. It's a very powerful piece of description because you use personification to great effect ('...crooked trees whispered...' , 'The faint sun peeked through the wobbly cracks...'). You also build tension brilliantly throughout the description and it leads your reader into a heart-thumping situation. It's lovely how you describe how the protagonist's '... sharp eyes caught a furry outline.' You wrote this in under 10 minutes, which shows that you can order your thoughts clearly and use all the writing techniques that you know to best effect. Well done!