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Writing in response to an image or text - by Caron

22.11.21

Thank you for sharing your writing, Caron! You have been writing so much recently, and it's amazing to see how you are sensitively varying your writing according to the task and the text and image prompts given. Each one has a slightly different style. Super stuff!

Here is some of your writing, including the three-paragraph story along with your initial jottings and notes for your plan and language ideas

The Sad Truth - by Caron

 

This sentence study shows that you have thought so carefully about the mood and atmosphere in the room. Choosing to describe time passing by slowly is a vivid way to paint a picture at the beginning. Your choice of words for the direct speech changes according to the character and their hidden emotions. This is super!

 

The Room - by Caron

 Falling From The Sky - by Caron