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Writing using a picture - by Heer


Heer, you have just joined our Powerful Writers' Club - and I am so pleased that you have! You are only in Year 3 at school, and already you have a fantastic imagination that shines in your writing. Your cursive handwriting is absolutely beautiful as well. We will look at helping you with punctuation, but I think you are a fantastic writer in the making!

A sentence that really stands out because of its powerful adjectives is: 'Broken branches crumbled down the cliff that had moss [on] as I almost stepped into the pitch black and gloomy cave.'

Thank you for sharing this writing.