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The Woman in the Woods - by Leo

29.11.21

 

Leo, this is fairy tale! It starts off seeming ok, and then takes us on a journey to a bitter end! Do you think the moral of this story could be, 'Be careful who you trust'? Your story starts with description, so we can imagine where we are as we read. Then, it introduces a creepy woman! You used a simile – ‘like a bug in a rug’, and then some wonderful vocabulary (verbs and adjectives) to describe the main character being hoisted up and then chopped into pieces. This is deliciously gory! Super job!

The Woman in the Woods - by Leo