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The Video Game - by Adrian

29.11.21

 

Adrian, you have a great imagination which is shown in how you took this image and turned it into a story about a modern video game. It is very exciting to think of the video game having this house and forest as one of the levels. Super idea! I can see super punctuation in your writing, such as commas, exclamation marks, question marks, brackets and ellipses, which is just amazing for your age! Fantastic!  Can I ask, what happens next once you get to this level in the video game?

The Video Game - by Adrian