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Space Alien - by Adrian

18.06.21

What a funny start to your story about space, Adrian!

'Blasting into space had not been on my 'To do' list.'

I can see that you are using the fronted adverbial/prepositional phrases to give more information and interest in your sentences:

'Beneath my feet, ...'

I like your mum's reaction at the end of the writing as well! I wonder if she believed you?

Well done and thank you for sharing your lovely work.