Space Alien - by Adrian
What a funny start to your story about space, Adrian!
'Blasting into space had not been on my 'To do' list.'
I can see that you are using the fronted adverbial/prepositional phrases to give more information and interest in your sentences:
'Beneath my feet, ...'
I like your mum's reaction at the end of the writing as well! I wonder if she believed you?
Well done and thank you for sharing your lovely work.