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Journey Through A Cave - by Arav


Thank you for sharing your writing with us Arav. This is a piece that you wrote at home and you have kindly shared so that other children can enjoy your writing. Right from the start, you choose language that hooks the reader. Using 'In the midst...' makes the reader feel that they are there. This is a descriptive piece, so there are no characters, so you have cleverly taken us on a journey. You use your five senses and powerful language to make the descriptions interesting and thought provoking. A fantastic job. Well done!