Giving details about a character in a complex sentence - by Haadiyah
Haadiyah, thank you for sharing this super-duper complex sentence! Over the past few weeks, you have been working hard on using different ways to describe characters and how to do this in complex sentences. One of the ways to give details is by using a relative clause (a clause beginning with a relative pronoun - in this case 'which'). Here your sentence not only has this relative clause, but it is also embedded in the sentence. Your commas have been used very well to give the sentence correct punctuation and necessary pauses. A huge well done!