Children's writing: using an emotion word to start a sentence - by Selena

You have perfectly captured the changing emotions in the two characters, Selena. This is partly because you have thought carefully about the setting description to create mood (i.e., Soundless mist rose from the still waters...), and also because you created meaningful dialogue. It's funny when one character says that he doesn't know what the sound is, but doesn't want to find out either! 

Our challenge for this class was to use an emotions word at the beginning of a sentence. You did this and used: Frightened, Jack opened his eyes...

Thanks so much for sharing this super writing.

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