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Children's writing: using adverbial openers for frequency and manner - by Muhammad


Thanks for sharing your writing, Muhammad! This piece is enchanting and creates tension because you slowly take the reader bit-by-bit through the steps that the character takes leading up to the door. Great job! Our focus was to use adverbial openers to show the frequency and manner in which something happened, and you've tried lots of ways of doing this in this writing (i.e., One happy morning, Suddenly, After, On the way etc.). Well done!


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The Forest Door - by Muhammad