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Children's writing: The Roval Deer Arena - by Anniyah

18.05.23

 


You ALWAYS surprise me, Anniyah, by writing using an angle that had never occurred to me! I loved reading this and really wanted to find out more. Your idea of turning the deer into a spectacle and one of many animals in the arena is enticing. You have moved the story on by writing in dialogue between the friends.

 

Excellent!

 

thank you so much for sharing.

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