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Children's writing: The Lion - by Anniyah

18.05.23

 

I LOVE this idea, Anniyah, and I can see parallels with The Lion King. The idea to jump 5 years on and show (not tell), how events did actually turn out is subtle and makes the reader work to find the conclusion - this is an excellent technique. Well done.

Thank you for sharing.

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