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Children's writing: The Danger Avalanche - by Reyansh

09.02.23

 

What beautifully angry images have created here for the snow avalanche, Reyansh. They are spectacular!


Examples:

The halo-white ice and snow barrelled down the steep dangerous mountain.

It was a ghost-white tidal wave crashing down with the trees.

It was a billowy, white ocean of snow down below.


This noise and rumbling wakes a very angry bear from a thousand-year sleep! Oh no... that doesn't sound good.

Let's read to find out what happens ...

 

The danger avalanche

There was quiet and without warning, the halo-white ice and snow barrelled down the steep dangerous mountain. It was a ghost-white tidal wave crashing down with the trees. It was a billowy, white ocean of snow down below.

Suddenly, the grizzly  woke up roaring  like a dinosaur . It had a frozen body, had ruby red eyes and had fierce, sharp teeth and also had sharp, pointy claws like a shark [which he clutched ferociously]. It’s thousand-year sleep was broken through in between, that meant the bear was about to crash into the mountain, demolish the caves, create a havoc and destroy the land…..