Children's writing: an evil character - by Joanne
Joanne, you have created a truly evil character here! Great job! Our task for this week's writing club was to learn language that helps to show a character as being sly and manipulative.
You have chosen some excellent phrases and images, such as calling the queen 'barbarous' (extremely brutal), and showing how she 'smirked'. Her choice of clothing also reflects her brutal personality (she sports a motionless fox around her neck), and candy-coloured blood drips from this. There are loads more wonderful examples in your writing, so why don't we read it?!
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