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The Turbulent Sea - by Adrian


Adrian, this is just a super-duper piece of writing! At only 7 years old, I am so impressed with your use of language, such as, 'The seagulls hang on to the sky like ghosts' and 'The sun is hanging in the sky like a sunflower.' They are spectacular similes!

When you were writing in class you just didn't stop - you were like a rocket with idea, after idea after idea! I'm so pleased to see that you have added extra descriptive sentences after the ones that we wrote together. You are very talented. Keep up the excellent use of figurative language Adrian!