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The Attic - by Eva


This is a fantastic story idea, Eva: a child goes to work with her gardener father to the old, mysterious manor house and she is allowed to explore all by herself! As a reader, I almost want to say to her, 'Don't do it!' I hope you write the rest of this. What happens in the attic? What does she find? You've said she 'tiptoed' and she was 'scared'. Oh no - this doesn't sound good! Well done and thank you for sharing!

It is also important to let people know that with your sister, Amaira, you have written a fantastic collection of 8 short stories (fables) and they are for sale on Amazon. They are brilliantly written, funny and have amazing illustrations.

The book is called: Short Stories: By the children, for the children!: Deotale, Eva, Deotale, Amaira: 9798594992122: Books

All proceeds of your book sale go to the charity 'Being Purple' (, which is a charity to promote awareness around disability and inclusion.

The Attic, by Eva