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Suspense writing by Jake, age 11


Road's End - by Jake

He hasn't said anything and we have been here for quite a long time. It's very strange. I'm very scared. I don't know what he's going to do. 

"Are you ok?" I said, feeling terrified.

I saw his dirty fingers and look at his watch. I turn around and look into misty goggles. Without a moment's hesitation I was going to tell him to get out. I'm very nervous about what he is going to do. A grimace appeared on his face as he took his mask off.