Children's writing: using similes - by AK

This is packed with beautifully chosen images, AK. You have used similes with great effect. Top job!

• the high rise buildings looked like arrow tips piercing through the blue sky...
• the river flowing like a liquid soul...
• slept like a baby
• looked like a dragon's ridged back...
• looked like a glowing medallion

Thank you so much for sharing your writing.

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