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Children's Writing: using repetition - by Ciona


Thank you for sharing your excellent writing with us, Ciona! For The Weekly Writing Club for this week, we focused on repeating certain words for effect - to make your reader really concentrate on that particular idea. You chose a super adverb to repeat in this sentence:

'It felt like wherever I looked, wherever I smelled, everything would turn into sweet honey.'

 Let's read your writing ...