Children's writing: The Train Station - by Jayden

Your task was to create tension in this scene by using time and the clock. This is a super job, Jayden. You tell us that the train station is empty, which is very strange, and then you describe stillness, apart for the tick, tick of the clock. Describing the minutes dragging past makes this seem like time is going painfully slow. Excellent and thank you so much for sharing.

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