Children's writing: The Swing - by Selena

Thank you for sharing this beautiful writing, Selena. You have set a calm yet slightly uneasy mood. The raw emotion of how the girl the feels about her mum really comes through here. You have used some lovely imagery choices:

'... she would stay on the swing till night like it was her best friend ...'

'...she felt a roller coaster of emotions ...'

'...she saw stars spreading right around her ...'

'.... winter choked the land ...'

'... the moon illuminated the sky ...'

Top job!

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