Children's writing: The Island - by Reyansh

You have added so much detail for the setting, Reyansh, that we can imagine we are right there. Your use of compound adjectives helps us to imagine just the correct shade of that colour and its qualities. I particularly love the image of the bloodthirsty bats!

Thanks for sharing this super writing.

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The Island

Reyansh was playing at the beach on a nice, sunny day where his feet were in the medallion-gold and  yellow sand. The butterscotch-yellow sun shone upon with the admiral-blue sky but suddenly, Reyansh saw a light beckoning to him to come in a cave that was full of blood-thirsty bats but a steep and smooth cliff was guarding the cave. He managed to climb it in a couple of rainy hours. He went in and saw a pile of priceless treasure and he realised that this was a treasure island that meant there were several more treasure hidden somewhere but what he didn’t know that now he had a curse….