Children's writing: The Ghost - by Selena

You chose to start this story extract with foreshadowing, Selena, and it works really well. It tempts your reader to carry on because they want to find out what happens.

You have also chosen some excellent sentences openers from the ISPACED list, to add variety to your sentence structure. This makes it more interesting for your reader.

Examples:

In the distance, 
As I approached it, 
As I stepped inside,  

Thanks so much for sharing this excellent writing.

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