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Children's writing - portraying a nervous character - by Mikael


Thanks for sharing this super piece of writing, Mikael.

Not only have you thought carefully about the character's body movements and actions to show nervousness, Mikael, but you've added setting description to create tension. This is a super technique. Both setting and character should work together to make your reader feel a certain way - and you've cracked it here!


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