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Children's writing: describing a nervous person - by Ciona

06.06.22

What a super way to start this description of a nervous character - with personification!

 

'The wind came for revenge...'

 

You have used setting description to create tension here, Ciona, and this works really well with how you've used 'Show, Don't Tell' for the character to show his nervousness. Super!

 

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