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Children's writing: describing a happy or excited character - by Adrian

07.06.22

This is a super description of a character who is nervous then feels excited, Adrian! You have shown us his body movements to help the reader understand how he is feeling, for example he 'jumps' and 'dashed'. And, what a powerful way to end:

'His voice echoed in the sky.'

 

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