Children's writing: Continue the story - by Adrian

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story continuation, Adrian. You read Chapter 6 of the book, The Giant Under The Snow, and then continued from a section of it just as a thinn man emerges from behind a tree. 

You have used some excellent figurative language to create vivid images of this man, and to describe how inhospitable the forest was.

Examples:


Onomatopoeia: Crack!

Metaphor: A sound broke the silence.

Metaphor: Winter's deathly grasp had strangled this forest.

Repetition: Nothing sounded, nothing stirred, nothing sang.



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