Children's writing: a story - by Sophia (A Grey World)
Thank you for sharing your 'A Grey World' writing with us, Sophia. One of your goals for this writing was to include figurative language, and you've achieved this in bucket loads!
What a great way to describe the market stall with this idiomatic metaphor:
'Their stall was clearly a masterpiece and the fabrics would blind her with flashy hues.'
There are so many more amazing examples in this writing. So, let's read and enjoy!