character description by sam, age 9

The Thug, by Sam

Like a raging rhino he staggered towards me, his bulging scarlet eyes staring at me. His eye like a guided missile locked onto its target. I ran like a cheetah but he ran after me though. He yelled, "Get back here punk!" I looked behind me. A muscular, raging man was chasing me.

See below: Sam you have really thought about how to use the vocabulary that we generated in the visual task and have showed how a character's actions and description can tell a story. Well done!