Baby Dragon - by Arthav
Arthav, you have very kindly put this piece of writing into our children's gallery so others can read it and get a few tips! This is a piece of writing that you did at home in one sitting over 20 minutes, and it's wonderful. So, thank you for sharing. It gives a description of finding a baby dragon and you have used a really good structure to take your reader on a journey. What a lovely description: 'It was half astonishing and it was half adorable.' I think that's exactly what someone would think on finding a baby dragon! Well done.