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Children's writing: The Monster - by AK

28.03.23

 

 

You have created excellent tension in your writing, AK, by drip-feeding the reader information about a noise that the main character hears and then the reaction of a cat.

 

"I heard a stomping noise."

"Suddenly I was woken up by my cat rushing down the stairs."

 

Thanks for sharing your excellent writing.


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