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Children's writing: my greatest achievement

27.08.21

Using writing title, 'Describe your best achievement', as a prompt, our wonderful writers (ages 8-10) have put pen to paper and in one session (from seeing the image to then discussing content, language and structure), have produced some remarkable writing. This type of task is tricky, because it is tempting to write a chronological recount rather than picking the most interesting and relevant parts to write about. The children have very kindly agreed to share their writing to help others. These are first drafts, so have not been revised yet.

** Please keep scrolling down to see all of our writers' work! **

My greatest achievement, by Amaira

My greatest achievement, by Amila

My greatest achievement, by Raphi

My greatest achievement, by Greeshma

 

My greatest achievement, by Summer

 My greatest achievement, by T

My greatest achievement, by 'R'

 

My greatest achievement, by Alicia